Up and down and Up and down
Watch as the dimples show on the clown
Merrily merrily he smiles at play
As he gracefully takes your innocents away
And when all seems to be lost
He'll slave you away just for the cost
Hold on real tight he says
as he spins you round and round
Why can't you stand he says
As you dizzily fall to the ground
And when you fall he stands real tall
Axe in hand as you hear deaths call
I think I'm seeing a common theme in your work.
A couple of them, in fact.
Also, did you mean "innocence"?
I dunno about you guys, but this sounds suspiciously like Communism to me.
While it's perfectly fine
to spit out stream
of consciousness
verse, attempting to see
what you come up with when
you don't have a difinitive plan
it's a good idea to figure out
when you're finished
if there's anything good in the resulting
pile of words.
Then, you can go back,
refine,
and present the board with something that may resemble
worth.
(with apologies to Nigel for stealing her response style)
10/10 would read again