i was writing last night, and i kinda...invoked eris.
yeah, not the best idea, but y'know... i'm pretty farkin crazy.
anyways, after she wasn't much help to me and my efforts, she took hold
and wrote this. i'm not sure exactly what it's hinting at. it could even be a joke.
but i'm really not sure.
Here:
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This is just a simple note
A half inspired spark of wit
To all of those I Wish I Smote
You putrid piles of rancid shit
I profane your name to my heart,Äôs content
Your time- it came, and was, and went
You Grey Faced Fuckers and Laugh-less Liars
We sinners of saints will set you to pyres
And smoke the roach of your mortal remains
Strike that last one, I just took a hit
It,Äôs far too cruel to set you to flames
And I haven,Äôt the want of building a pit
But I let you live last time and now?
Look at all that you have done
Don,Äôt you feel like a milking sow?
What kind of game are you trying to run?
I guess the only option flat-
Is to Eat what Can, and Will, be Et
And shit you out, what can be shat
And spread your mess in the flower bed.
-signed Eris
poo poo ka-choo!
Ps
I,Äôm being serious, but I feel funny,Ķ
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the ps just sends chills through me, or maybe it's the fan by the window?
or maybe it the shit about to hit that fan. i felt this hould be shared, even though i haven't given PD.com a thought for a while.
well, i've someone to kill now. or was it something?
-Prater Festwo, patron sinner of saints, the Architech's Bitch, Mortal remains of Nietzsche Von Bastard, Saint Bastard, KSC, DM, LD, PPS
10/10?
Quote from: Irreverend Hugh, KSC10/10?
I agree?
Nice. Im not really into rhyming poetry, and I liked this one.
Idem, you must be excitedly waiting for spore, huh?
Quote from: Buddhist_Monk_WannabeNice. Im not really into rhyming poetry, and I liked this one.
Idem, you must be excitedly waiting for spore, huh?
Yeah, unfortunately...
11/10, if only for making "You putrid piles of rancid shit" sound elegant.
Might go well with some accompaniment; it was sort of hard to detect the beat part way through. Other than that I dig it as far as 10.
10/10
Eris has always been a wee bit unpredictable...which is good...right? :wink:
9/10.
The East German judge dinged you for saying you "invoked Eris".
TGRR,
Really can't talk about this Mahdgjickque stuff with a straight face, anymore.
yeah, i say "invoked" because it's easier for the layman to play along if i do.
she still be droppin das boots
Quote from: FelixMight go well with some accompaniment; it was sort of hard to detect the beat part way through. Other than that I dig it as far as 10.
verses = "The Five Stages" (catmatic drivel)
that's why, i think, smoking roaches was mentioned- as well as the irregularities and
confused meter- in the third stanza.
could be bullshit, though.