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Blood Is Thicker Than Rum II: The Sequel

Started by East Coast Hustle, August 28, 2010, 03:25:21 AM

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Kai

If there is magic on this planet, it is contained in water. --Loren Eisley, The Immense Journey

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The Good Reverend Roger

I like it.  It needs a bit of proof reading, but no polishing outside of maybe cleaning up the dialogue paragraphs (for form, not content).  That shit is salable. 
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

East Coast Hustle

You really think so? Thanks, man. Maybe if I ever finish it I'll look into shopping it around for some short story compilations.
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The Good Reverend Roger

Quote from: First City Hustle on November 14, 2010, 11:48:27 PM
You really think so? Thanks, man. Maybe if I ever finish it I'll look into shopping it around for some short story compilations.

A page a day.  When you have 120 pages, beat up a publisher (this shit is too good for Lulu).  You can even do it as a series of short stories.
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.