Current

• add explanation of archiving, list some things that you should try to include in the archives
• need a printable rulebook: see RB_Singlepage
• flesh out different kinds of Shades
• +Dream Walk: artistic dream scene
• more types of territory
• add a three-fold pamphlet and other promotional materials
• General: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elevator_pitch
  • make business card
  • make pamphlet
  • Website design: explanation should be prominent. that one should probably be big and labeled "INTRODUCTION" or "START HERE" and not behind a fold-out tab in the menu, but somewhere prominent
  • Advice from 000 1, 2.
• One page character sheet, one page rules sheet

Old

• clarify bestow, gift, damage calls, refresh
• Change "Lord or Lady" to "Warden" throughout the rules
• better define how to use Veritas: can't change what already happened. Shouldn't be used for combat. Shouldn't be impossible, unfair, or unbelievable. Shouldn't dictate player behavior. Do not narrate where you can create an experience.
• balance races: dead gods need a vulnerability. Choose one?
• add explanation of Veritas
• better dream walks
• create plot page for dream walks to link to
• racial skills
• write introduction for wakes
• shave down calls to only include what's in skills
• write character creation page
• add rituals to create currency, a few rituals to use currency, rituals to create a shaper
• add shaper powers, political offices
• add singe player dream walk "town hall", "Songlines"
• add dream walks: clue, capture the flag