Chapter 26 for Editing and Discussion

LMNO:

Serious is the root of hilarious.
Laughter can be very serious.

The wise spag laughs all day
and has no need of jokes.

Don't let other people tell you what's funny.
Actually, now that I think about it,
your face is pretty funny.

This may be personal preference, but I don't know if that last stanza "fits" with the tone and tenor we're working with here.

Cram's Reply:

Fuck our tone. I lol'd. :-P

to me, the sharp contrast is surprising; it's what makes it funny. I am willing to bend - maybe we should canvas for a third opinion. Cramulus 14:00, 2 June 2009 (UTC)