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A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« on: April 04, 2012, 10:03:44 pm »
In case any of you might not know, im a highschool freshman. For an english project, I had to write a parody of othello. I didnt know what to do so I replaced all the characters with toast, and I made an entire comic out of it.
I want you guys to critique it in the worst way possible.































Im still not done with it, its due tomorrow...

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2012, 10:09:23 pm »
This is fucking genius.  GENIUS, I SAY! 
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2012, 10:22:24 pm »
Othello is the most burnt piece of toast?


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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2012, 10:26:07 pm »
Othello is the most burnt piece of toast?



He is the pumpernickel because he is black, yes.

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2012, 12:08:46 am »
This is genius cris.
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2012, 03:11:00 am »
I love it!  :lulz:
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 06:53:01 am »
Fucking awesome, that's what.

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« Last Edit: April 05, 2012, 06:57:09 am by Alty »
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 12:59:36 pm »
I wish I could critique this (in the worst way), but it's too amazing.


Also, I agree with Alty.
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 08:02:57 pm »
Don't leave us hanging, cris!  Some of us have never seen or read Othello!
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #9 on: April 06, 2012, 12:47:37 am »
Wow, this is brilliant. 2 gold stars.

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #10 on: April 06, 2012, 02:23:19 am »
Thanks guys

This means alot to me c:

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #11 on: April 06, 2012, 02:31:07 am »
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #12 on: April 06, 2012, 02:39:15 am »
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.

My favorite panel is "It was COMMANDER SUNBEAM."
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #13 on: April 06, 2012, 10:36:06 pm »
MOOAR!!!
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #14 on: April 12, 2012, 02:34:55 am »
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.

Okay, I expect to get it back in about a week, I shall post the rest of it later