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A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« on: April 04, 2012, 10:03:44 pm »
In case any of you might not know, im a highschool freshman. For an english project, I had to write a parody of othello. I didnt know what to do so I replaced all the characters with toast, and I made an entire comic out of it.
I want you guys to critique it in the worst way possible.































Im still not done with it, its due tomorrow...

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2012, 10:09:23 pm »
This is fucking genius.  GENIUS, I SAY! 
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2012, 10:22:24 pm »
Othello is the most burnt piece of toast?

"The thoughts of all men arise from the darkness. If you are the movement of your soul, and the cause of that movement precedes you, then how could you ever call your thoughts your own? How could you be anything other than a slave to the darkness that comes before? Only the Logos allows one to mitigate that slavery. Only knowing the sources of thought and action allows us to own our thoughts and our actions, to throw off the yoke of circumstance."
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2012, 10:26:07 pm »
Othello is the most burnt piece of toast?



He is the pumpernickel because he is black, yes.

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2012, 12:08:46 am »
This is genius cris.
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2012, 03:11:00 am »
I love it!  :lulz:
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 06:53:01 am »
Fucking awesome, that's what.

Could you do Titus Andronicus as burritos? I'd pay for that.
« Last Edit: April 05, 2012, 06:57:09 am by Alty »

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 12:59:36 pm »
I wish I could critique this (in the worst way), but it's too amazing.


Also, I agree with Alty.
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 08:02:57 pm »
Don't leave us hanging, cris!  Some of us have never seen or read Othello!
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #9 on: April 06, 2012, 12:47:37 am »
Wow, this is brilliant. 2 gold stars.

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #10 on: April 06, 2012, 02:23:19 am »
Thanks guys

This means alot to me c:

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #11 on: April 06, 2012, 02:31:07 am »
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.

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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #12 on: April 06, 2012, 02:39:15 am »
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.

My favorite panel is "It was COMMANDER SUNBEAM."
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #13 on: April 06, 2012, 10:36:06 pm »
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Re: A parody of othello where everyone is toast.
« Reply #14 on: April 12, 2012, 02:34:55 am »
Now you can use all that gratitude and post the REST OF IT ALREADY.

I showed this to a bunch of people today. They all thought it was the knees of MANY bees.
I lold several times, it's their little toasty faces.

Okay, I expect to get it back in about a week, I shall post the rest of it later