Dead and Alive

[Z_Man_iz_eer!]

i find out that i am now dead

strange !
i remember going to bed
i was so tired

and now
i am both dead
and alive

but here i am
still thinking
still seeing

i am still conscious !

i am now looking at my body
my face has a smile on it

i am dead
not dead
i am dead

there are people
in the room

i see thundclaps
of emotion
i see anger
i see sorrow

murky red colours
swirling

black clouds hanging

the rains of  sadness
baptise my dead body

[East Coast Hustle]

I'm sorry, I think you were looking for the gothpoetry forums.

[Z_Man_iz_eer!]

I'm sorry, I think you were looking for the gothpoetry forums.

if I wanted goth poetry I would have gone there. and by the way I don't write goth poetry. well, now I do! so maybe I should.

no! I'll proceed to checkout

[Sir Squid Diddimus]

here

thedeadroses.proboards102.com

they suck too. you'll fit right in.

[Bebek Sincap Ratatosk]

ROFL

[Z_Man_iz_eer!]

here

thedeadroses.proboards102.com

they suck too. you'll fit right in.

you suck too!  :lulz:how marvellous!

[East Coast Hustle]

seriously though.

enough with the shitty poetry unless you just enjoy abuse.

everyone here is waiting for you to make a post that makes some sort of sense and engages us intellectually.

and no, it's NOT our job to engage you intellectually on YOUR terms. YOU came HERE.

[Sir Squid Diddimus]

here

thedeadroses.proboards102.com

they suck too. you'll fit right in.

you suck too!  :lulz:how marvellous!

HAW HAW! YOU ARE SO FUNNY!



wait.........










no.

[Z_Man_iz_eer!]

here

thedeadroses.proboards102.com

they suck too. you'll fit right in.

you suck too!  :lulz:how marvellous!

HAW HAW! YOU ARE SO FUNNY!



wait.........










no.

REALLY? well, I knew so! you engaged your minds and ejaculated your energy in responding to what you label shitty poetry. Some people like this, some don't; it boils down to choice. As to abuse, I don't see it as abuse; its your right to comment. You say what you choose, I read your comments and move on to the next - unless it happens to be startling!

[LMNO]

Truth be told, we would much rather spend our energy engaged in an exchange of worthwhile ideas, but if the only way we can interact is to make fun of you, well... at least we're getting a few yuks out of it.

[Bebek Sincap Ratatosk]

 

[Messier Undertree]

Stunning. Enigmatic. Quixotic.

[Sir Squid Diddimus]

breathtaking.
i think your a brilliant poet.


(ha)

[Mother John Frumm]

I think your a brilliant poet.

[Triple Zero]

Stunning. Enigmatic. Quixotic.