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Started by Cramulus, March 30, 2009, 07:28:20 PM

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Cramulus

March 30, 2009, 07:28:20 PM
http://principiadiscordia.com/cramulus/index.php?title=Hodgeonauts

Her'es a piece I've written for the Prophetica Discordia. Feedback requested.

LMNO

#1
March 30, 2009, 07:33:51 PM
QuoteGo ahead, say it to me, say it out loud: Fun is a sacrament which, like religion, must be guarded with territorial pissing and monkey noises. I will moralize you into a hospital, man. Non serviam. Back off."



Richter

#2
March 30, 2009, 08:15:08 PM
Good message, and the presentation is very nonconfrontational and conversational.  Leaves you with more of a "I SHOULD do that.", as opposed to "OMG END OF LIFE".  I like. 

Also, motivational pieces with content other than "OMG save the ::Insert pet cause::", or "::Insert pet Political / Social / Band Following:: of the (Country / world) UNITE!", are a rare thing, so this fills a good niche.
Quote from: Eater of Clowns on May 22, 2015, 03:00:53 AM
Anyone ever think about how Richter inhabits the same reality as you and just scream and scream and scream, but in a good way?   :lulz:

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Corvidia

#3
March 30, 2009, 08:45:40 PM
:mittens:

Well done, Cram. Makes me want to get up and GO.  :mrgreen:

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One for sorrow,
Two for joy,
Three for a girl,
Four for a boy,
Five for silver,
Six for gold,
Seven for a secret never to be told.

Jenne

#4
March 31, 2009, 12:56:48 AM
:mittens:

Cramulus

#5
March 31, 2009, 01:43:05 AM

The Good Reverend Roger

#6
March 31, 2009, 01:57:43 AM
Hey, how the fuck did you do that?
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

Cramulus

#7
March 31, 2009, 02:29:46 AM
do what?

The Good Reverend Roger

#8
March 31, 2009, 02:58:42 AM
" It's just that Depeche Mode were a bunch of optimistic loveburgers."
- TGRR, shaming himself forever, 7/8/2017

"Billy, when I say that ethics is our number one priority and safety is also our number one priority, you should take that to mean exactly what I said. Also quality. That's our number one priority as well. Don't look at me that way, you're in the corporate world now and this is how it works."
- TGRR, raising the bar at work.

Triple Zero

#9
March 31, 2009, 03:36:12 AM
roger, faust gave cram a piece of wiki on the PD server to work out his ideas and such.

also cram, cool article! i like the writing style! i may have one or two tiny remarks, but I'll get to that later. I also got a big remark, and that is that the entire text is sort of just meandering, doesnt seem to go anywhere, except at the end of it you get this idea of "i should go and DO something", which is probably the point. in addition to that, it's an easy read, so maybe it doesnt really need a right upfront target and idea where it's going. maybe this was your goal. (it's too late here, sorry for the incoherent feedback)
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Faust

#10
March 31, 2009, 02:57:43 PM
cram asked for a wiki to play around with so I obliged.
Sleepless nights at the chateau

Cramulus

#11
March 31, 2009, 10:35:15 PM
ah yeah, pdcom/cramulus is my "notepad wiki". There are certain ideas which itch in my brain until I've written them down and showed them to someone. And wiki is the perfect format for that because I can easily invite in other collaborators. It's been a very useful tool for certain stuff.

Quote from: Triple Zero on March 31, 2009, 03:36:12 AM
also cram, cool article! i like the writing style! i may have one or two tiny remarks, but I'll get to that later. I also got a big remark, and that is that the entire text is sort of just meandering, doesnt seem to go anywhere, except at the end of it you get this idea of "i should go and DO something", which is probably the point. in addition to that, it's an easy read, so maybe it doesnt really need a right upfront target and idea where it's going. maybe this was your goal. (it's too late here, sorry for the incoherent feedback)

thanx much

and yeah, the idea was to be a sort of rambling meandering essay. Maybe it wanders a bit too much, because I'm not able to bring it all together at the end. If it made you feel like you should do something, but you had to think about what, then I succeeded. If it leaves you going "WTF was THAT all about?" then it meanders too much.

Triple Zero

#12
April 01, 2009, 01:26:47 AM
ok, then it's skimming the edge, but still just on the right side ;-)
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e-prime disclaimer: let it seem fairly unclear I understand the apparent subjectivity of the above statements. maybe.

INFORMATION SO POWERFUL, YOU ACTUALLY NEED LESS.

Reginald Ret

#13
April 02, 2009, 12:43:04 AM
Quote from: Triple Zero on April 01, 2009, 01:26:47 AM
ok, then it's skimming the edge, but still just on the right side ;-)
Agreed.
I'm feeling a build up of willingness to go out and do something, anything!
Is that just me or are you with me?
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#14
April 02, 2009, 12:48:37 AM
It's Spring Fever, PD.com style.
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