Sweet Nothings

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Fuck that shit.
It was an experience atleast,
The tempting eyes,
The handsome face, strong arms ..
But what does it all mean?

I was there,
Watching the rhythm of an orgy,
Skin on Skin
Chest on chest
Lips on lips.

I was tempted,
Invited many times,
I even thought of joining
Was I jealous? Was I missing out?
But I'm not a born hunter

Never before did I feel concerned,
But I realise - its the nature of Man.
But why, isn't it mine?
The idea of feeling special - lost
Amongst the bare chested Men

But thankfully, I realise
Its not what it all seems
I know me for me
What was I to expect
It was a Gay Club

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I wrote this on the train to work today, my first attempt at writing any form of Poetry really.

[Storebrand]

Beyond really liking the visual the bold portion is really awesome.

Fuck that shit.
It was an experience atleast,
The tempting eyes,
The handsome face, strong arms ..
But what does it all mean?

I was there,
Watching the rhythm of an orgy,
Skin on Skin
Chest on chest
Lips on lips.

I was tempted,
Invited many times,
I even thought of joining
Was I jealous? Was I missing out?
But I'm not a born hunter

Never before did I feel concerned,
But I realise - its the nature of Man.
But why, isn't it mine?
The idea of feeling special - lost
Amongst the bare chested Men

But thankfully, I realise
Its not what it all seems
I know me for me
What was I to expect
It was a Gay Club

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Aw, thank you very much

[Mesozoic Mister Nigel]

The last two lines totally made the whole thing for me.


Sometimes, a poem with a punch line is the best kind.

[Bebek Sincap Ratatosk]

[Cramulus]

I like it, NP, nice work!

How does the first line fit into all this?

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  Thanks very much guys

@Cram - The first line, was showing my frustration

@Nigel Haha thanks I'm glad you approve