i find out that i am now dead
strange !
i remember going to bed
i was so tired
and now
i am both dead
and alive
but here i am
still thinking
still seeing
i am still conscious !
i am now looking at my body
my face has a smile on it
i am dead
not dead
i am dead
there are people
in the room
i see thundclaps
of emotion
i see anger
i see sorrow
murky red colours
swirling
black clouds hanging
the rains of sadness
baptise my dead body
I'm sorry, I think you were looking for the gothpoetry forums.
Quote from: East Coast Hustle on December 12, 2007, 03:10:46 PM
I'm sorry, I think you were looking for the gothpoetry forums.
if I wanted goth poetry I would have gone there. and by the way I don't write goth poetry. well, now I do! so maybe I should.
no! I'll proceed to checkout
here
thedeadroses.proboards102.com
they suck too. you'll fit right in.
ROFL :lulz: :lulz: :lulz:
Quote from: Cthulhu's Squidling on December 13, 2007, 05:02:31 AM
here
thedeadroses.proboards102.com
they suck too. you'll fit right in.
:lulz:you suck too! :lulz:how marvellous! :lulz:
seriously though.
enough with the shitty poetry unless you just enjoy abuse.
everyone here is waiting for you to make a post that makes some sort of sense and engages us intellectually.
and no, it's NOT our job to engage you intellectually on YOUR terms. YOU came HERE.
Quote from: Z_Man_iz_eer! on December 13, 2007, 08:57:37 PM
Quote from: Cthulhu's Squidling on December 13, 2007, 05:02:31 AM
here
thedeadroses.proboards102.com
they suck too. you'll fit right in.
:lulz:you suck too! :lulz:how marvellous! :lulz:
HAW HAW! YOU ARE SO FUNNY!
wait.........
no.
Quote from: Cthulhu's Squidling on December 14, 2007, 04:27:20 AM
Quote from: Z_Man_iz_eer! on December 13, 2007, 08:57:37 PM
Quote from: Cthulhu's Squidling on December 13, 2007, 05:02:31 AM
here
thedeadroses.proboards102.com
they suck too. you'll fit right in.
:lulz:you suck too! :lulz:how marvellous! :lulz:
HAW HAW! YOU ARE SO FUNNY!
wait.........
no.
REALLY? well, I knew so! you engaged your minds and ejaculated your energy in responding to what you label shitty poetry. Some people like this, some don't; it boils down to choice. As to abuse, I don't see it as abuse; its your right to comment. You say what you choose, I read your comments and move on to the next - unless it happens to be startling!
Truth be told, we would much rather spend our energy engaged in an exchange of worthwhile ideas, but if the only way we can interact is to make fun of you, well... at least we're getting a few yuks out of it.
:lulz: :lulz: :lulz: :lulz: :lulz: :lulz: :lulz: :lulz:
Stunning. Enigmatic. Quixotic.
breathtaking.
i think your a brilliant poet.
(ha)
I think your a brilliant poet.
a veritable river of textual textures and verbal virility.
"A rollicking good read"
-The New York Times
Quote from: LMNO on December 14, 2007, 09:14:43 PM
Truth be told, we would much rather spend our energy engaged in an exchange of worthwhile ideas, but if the only way we can interact is to make fun of you, well... at least we're getting a few yuks out of it.
:lulz:r u sure?
want u more
as im laffin at u
cos u remind me
of poo
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Quote from: Z_Man_iz_eer! on December 16, 2007, 05:12:57 PM
Quote from: LMNO on December 14, 2007, 09:14:43 PM
Truth be told, we would much rather spend our energy engaged in an exchange of worthwhile ideas, but if the only way we can interact is to make fun of you, well... at least we're getting a few yuks out of it.
:lulz:r u sure?
want u more
as im laffin at u
cos u remind me
of poo
congratulations on being the first poster in history to provoke the pledge before breaking 50.
ECH,
pledge.
Quote from: Z_Man_iz_eer! on December 16, 2007, 05:12:57 PM
Quote from: LMNO on December 14, 2007, 09:14:43 PM
Truth be told, we would much rather spend our energy engaged in an exchange of worthwhile ideas, but if the only way we can interact is to make fun of you, well... at least we're getting a few yuks out of it.
:lulz:r u sure?
want u more
as im laffin at u
cos u remind me
of poo
"A provocative and well-written piece that will surely move you. One of the great literary marvels of our times. "
"For a day, America was brought together in tears and raw emotion. This poem shall truly live on in the American soul."
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